Bottoms Up

I just hit rock bottom I fear The landing sure tore up my rear A BADLY bruised butt But hey, ya know what? I'm starting to LIKE it down here

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/10/2015 4:02:00 PM

I'll drink with you to this witty write, Tim! Like your humour! #7 // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/6/2015 7:50:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha....this is so funny!! Thank you Tim for making me laugh. Hugs

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/6/2015 7:20:00 PM

You are hilarious and so upbeat. That is what I have always admired about you and your poetry. Excellent limmy Timmy! Always, Laura

Elaine George

Date: 8/6/2015 8:16:00 AM

I am still laughing!!!. Thank you for starting my morning on a high. Great limerick, Tim. Elaine

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/5/2015 10:54:00 AM

lorra laughs Tim excellent limerick hugs 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/5/2015 2:33:00 AM

Tim, you are one of those poets here in Soup who can easily put a smile in me!! funny one!~Olive Eloisa =')

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/1/2015 3:59:00 PM

lol.......there's only one way to go from there..........and that's UP !!!! ^ !!!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/1/2015 9:45:00 AM

lol very amusing Tim hugs 7

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/30/2015 12:14:00 PM

Love this! It's going into my favs.

Constance La France

Date: 7/30/2015 12:04:00 PM

Tim, fun Limerick a well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, in the garden and for the nice comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2015 12:48:00 AM

haha. I thought it was gonna be a poop poem. You big tease!!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/28/2015 2:16:00 PM

oh no , you better pull yourself up, lol... enjoyed your humor, tim.. how are you?.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2015 5:55:00 AM

- Hope not your butt became yellow and blue :)))) .... well done, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/28/2015 6:02:00 AM

I'm afraid it did Anne and I'm still a bit sore...Thanks for the comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/28/2015 4:41:00 AM

lol great one Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/28/2015 6:03:00 AM

Thanks my friend! Your comments always mean SO much to me...