Bottomless Depth

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Pick-A-Title, Vol 38 - Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

Sllabale Count of 342-453-232-335-615 Yalto form by Edward Ibeh

Written 8/28/2023

Impressions Bottomless Depth In mind. An unexplored Blue world pursues to Crawl inland. Foaming Fingers text Imprints Left against Golden grains Of sand, receding. Sonorous wave hum sound, Back To bottomless depth.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/27/2023 12:15:00 PM

This is an amazing poem. I felt as though I was at the shore facing the ocean.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/26/2023 4:36:00 AM

Such a wonderful Yalto, Eve:-) I enjoyed it tremendously. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2023 11:09:00 AM

- Excellent, Eve ... impressive form with these short lines - (I wrote one a long time ago ... can't remember the title... too many poems :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Take care. .. hugs :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/28/2023 11:31:00 PM

Great imagination, Eve.