Both My Kids Have Birthdays Next Month

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Is weird to be born in society thinks is the greatest ever and for good reasons. I was being breast-fed when my mom heard the news of JFK She remembers, I don't. I don't member RFK either or even MLK, but what I will tell ya is forty odd years later doesn't ring true that all three were “random acts of violence” We gotta get smart, people trust our own brains 'cause I tell ya what slave-owners don't want ya to know Long as ya buy in to brown-nose ass kissin' consumption you're riskin' your kids future and furthermore the half-life for super-powers is about two-hundred years, ask greece and rome turkey, egypt, great brittain and so on just sayin' think on it please that's all.

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The Fringe

Date: 10/28/2011 11:12:00 AM

I'm trying to release judgment of it all and let society be whatever it wants to be. Yet I hear your words and applaud you. Your words could shake foundations, and I'm glad I read them. Your friend. David

The Fringe

Date: 10/28/2011 11:12:00 AM

And by default we now are exactly what we believe we are--victims, sinners, broken, unworthy..... I am leaning to think people are Creators of the highest order, but we can only create according to our vision. And now, our vision is exactly as we are witnessing--people (including me) who always look away, usually to blame or whatever will make it so we don't look at ourselves.

The Fringe

Date: 10/28/2011 11:10:00 AM

I agree those murders were not as we were told. I also agree empires are doomed to fall. Perhaps people living in empires become so distracted by... hmm .... consuming perhaps (as you said)? that we do not face who we are. Perhaps people's "faith" in whatever path of least resistance is most popular will always be the exact distraction for us to enslave ourselves by our own free will. I now question whether we just do not have the maturity to think of anything better than what we now "know".