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Both Mother and Daughter 2 No Heavenly End Gods Love

Once upon a time there lived a young girl Who eventually was to grow up inevitably later into a young women And when she did all she ever wanted and dreamed of endlessly then was to have a young daughter of her very own And in time she surely did which in tern made here complete and truly happy having seemingly had her every waking wish duely granted Now as the story goes just 2 short years after having her beautiful baby girl 1 morning whilst in the shower peering down she noticed her hair was starting to fall out Then after booking an appointment with her G.P in order to get it checked out She was later on her precluding follow up appointment to discover she was to be diagnosed with terminal cancer And what was to become of her daughter Well she herself no more than 2 years later to the day her very self be diagnosed destined to suffer the same erroneous fate And all her family and countless medical caregivers had as cold comfort to offer her was both sadly and unfortunately nothing more and other than this Your Mommy loves you so much she cannot wait to see her beautiful little baby angel again in heaven And she left as she came into this world with a smile beaming across her face outwardly displaying such joy and carefree abandonment lust and verve for life The likes of which this world i fear may never ever see once again as it was a once in a lifetime as was she Reading the deaths column in the Echo i believe her funeral is this coming sunday at her local church where she will be burried beside her mother One can only pray and hope that God will be there for both her and her mother this time if at all

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Date: 2/5/2023 6:44:00 AM
What can I say Christopher other than it’s terribly sad when this happens, some conditions and cancers are hereditary by nature, if the mother is aware in advance she could pass on the cancerous genes, should she still have a baby? I cannot answer that question but the doctors should advise, I understand exactly where you’re going with this one religious wise, so I’m probably not the right person to ask to review, but it’s certainly thought provoking, and controversial, cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 2/5/2023 8:50:00 AM
Cheers for taking your time to comment and read. This is just something i thought or dreamed up but it obviously does happen or occur sadly. And everything happens for a reason or it is all part of a grand plan. To put it mildly is contrite at best and of little comfort i can only presume Cheers

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