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Boredom Waiting In Doctor's Office

My husband gets very impatient waiting so I told him to write a poem: On a farm there was a donkey Who's feet had a scent that was funky Because he had stepped in something chunky By: The Reverend T. This is my response: Out of boredom he wrote a verse In frustration it was very terse Of course, he did not want to curse So he used words that were worse Now he's pacing the floor Standing right in front of the door (Not true, just needed to be busy) Nurse tries to enter in a rush Open door sets him on his tursh

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Date: 7/27/2010 7:09:00 AM
A REAL COMIC ONE ! I CAN REALISE THE WATING AGONY ! I AM A HOMEOPATH MYSELF, BUT PERFORM ONLY PHILANTHROPIC SERVICE THESE DAYS ! THANKS FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS ON MY 'HARLEM BLUES' , WE DON'T HAVE A 'MESSAGE BOX' HERE TO THANK YOU ! BEST WISHES , - Raj
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Date: 7/4/2010 9:22:00 AM
hahaha. yes, writing out of bordeom is ALSO a great thing to do. And you poor guys, in the doctor's office. I HATE that. Tell your hubby he did a GREAT poem. I thought it was funny, Luv, andrea
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:57:00 AM
Got great laughs from this poem, Sara. Thanks! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:59:00 AM
This is wonderful and funny, so quickly you and your husband wrote a poem that made my day! *RJK
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:59:00 AM
... 'tis an invocation of my weaver's sadness upon the soft wings of agility; or as one could say, the bird of resignation putting on the wings of poesy ... all the same, Sara, you have redeemed your golden voice, not sacrificing those thrones of realism ... Cheers! Canny
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Date: 7/3/2010 8:24:00 AM
funny, Caleb says unky!
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:31:00 AM
Very good lol...thanks for the smile... Michael
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:01:00 AM
Funny poem. I don't live in Arizona. I live in New Jersey.
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