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Little Zoom a very white mouse, who lived in a humongous house, single and without any spouse; but he loved Strauss, but he loved Strauss. Though he tried to learn how to waltz, always needing some smelling salts, his clumsiness was not his fault; had plenty schmaltz, had plenty schmaltz. One day he received a scooter, with red wheels it looked like pewter, on it there was no one cuter; Waltzing scooter! waltzing scooter! Now Zooms spins around the big house, this scooter-waltzing little mouse, to the enchanting strains of Strauss; a waltzing mouse, a waltzing mouse.

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Date: 1/21/2022 7:18:00 PM
Hello M.L. ... I read your poem as lyrical and would certainly entertain children - thank you M.L. - Lindsay
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Date: 1/17/2022 2:57:00 AM
Who would be bored as two dance to the tune of Strass. Prefer the slow waltz though.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/17/2022 3:26:00 PM
Fast or slow, Strauss is super. Thanks Victor.
Date: 1/16/2022 4:51:00 PM
M. L., I love this poem. I like the way it is structured; I like the rhymes and the flow from stanza to stanza. Nice work!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/17/2022 3:26:00 PM
Thanks so much.

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