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ice coated fence posts punctuate the snowy trail… frosty whiffs of breath _______________________________ Winter Haiku

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Kim Merryman

Date: 2/22/2013 9:40:00 PM

Carrie, congrats on your win with this very vivid haiku! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 6:30:00 PM

an honest to GOODness haiku!! Congrats, lovely lady.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 PM

Carrie,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/19/2011 3:38:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, a lovely wintry snapshot :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 3:10:00 PM

This is so visual, Carrie. Gosh, both yours and mine could also work in the animal contest too, but I guess I better think of a new one. haha. Congrats here on a well deserved win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/17/2011 5:35:00 AM

Great one, Carrie. I especially liked the word punctuate! They do look like exclamation marks, don't they? :-) Congrats on the win(d). Hugs to you, Cyndi

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/9/2011 12:23:00 PM

* “I Love This Precious Painting * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carrie * Allows Ones Imagination to Journey Through Its Canvas * Enchanting What They May Find * Brushing Colours & Angels * Or As Angels They Shall Be * Just Like You * Absolutely Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/9/2011 11:45:00 AM

Soup mail

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/9/2011 6:26:00 AM

You captured a lonely frigid scenario with this Haiku along with it's title, Carrie. Great job and good luck in the contest.

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/8/2011 11:57:00 PM

Great Haiku, Carrie. Love the imagery. Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2011 5:44:00 PM

This is a truly wonderful write...in a beautiful wonderland! I loved reading your write, awesome work!