Border Brilliance

in the dayspring light blue,green,white colours of June mingle,to delight

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Raul Moreno

Date: 6/25/2009 1:06:00 AM

The mingle of colors, brilliant observation...Raul

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/17/2009 10:51:00 PM

I love your haiku's they are always filled with so much beauty and you know how to throw the paint to the canvas Brian style.

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 6/17/2009 3:44:00 PM

Unique way of blending, Brian.... you rock!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/17/2009 3:29:00 PM

I like the mix of colors here, too. I forgot to mention that, earlier. I enjoy your work. It has a distinctive tone. That's a gift you should not take lightly. Regards, GK

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/17/2009 2:58:00 PM

Dayspring is an unique word and it somehow fits here rather snuggly like a Junebug. Thank you for your kind words on my entry and I enjoy entering your contest. They are different and they force me to stretch myself. Regards, GK

P Sheart

Date: 6/17/2009 10:34:00 AM

Hi Brian Such a breathtaking write. Love spring and all the beautiful colours that come with the season. Thanks for putting a smile upon my heart with this beautiful portrait you paint. Love Light Truth Patricia

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2009 9:51:00 AM

Indeed they do, Brian! The spring colors can add so much joy to our lives. Wish spring would last forever. Very nice haiku! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/17/2009 7:07:00 AM

I love this image....makes me think of a Monet...colors of a garden! Lovely! ~ Thank you for your kind comments, Brian. ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/17/2009 5:03:00 AM

This is a beautiful work Brian..so well written by your talented pen.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/17/2009 3:19:00 AM

yes, the impressionist blend of June is captured by this fine haiku! Brian, jim

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 6/17/2009 12:11:00 AM

Beautifully thought out Brian, makes me think of lazy summer days lounging between the daisy's! Thanks for bringing us some sunshine to brighten a very overcast morning! Kindest thoughts, Anna-marie.