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Boot Scrapes

The wax drips slowly down the hardening ripple Hours pass by as a second, I hear: . crickets birds the wind water drips fingers tapping against the chair The shadows have closed into night My candle has long ago burned to ash I hear silence on the porch Your boot scrapes are missing Signaling the end of my day No need for roast and carrots cooking Your boot scrapes won't come home anymore...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/2/2010 7:48:00 AM
Hi Doris this is exceptional poetry reminding all of us that the silence can get the best of us if we allow it too. But this is such a profound write thank you for sharing your heart strings through your soul prints with all of us here in the poetry community,Please feel free to also visit me at my other site there are pictures of me and also my family. sincerely Dean www.poetrypoem.com/poet3238
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:58:00 PM
Wow, this one is really good writing, Doris. Great description. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/31/2010 12:14:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Doris. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 11:51:00 AM
Doris..an excellent write my friend.. agree with Wilma.. sad but intense too. and thankxxx for bringing my "High Steppin'" poem to my attention with the shape..looks like a sourbet' cup.. and I am so bad at drawing too but try and this one did not even try.. wow.. somebody up there luvs me..haha..
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:14:00 AM
Doris this is a very sad write. Wishing to hear those boot scrapes again a noise that might have been a nuisance in the part is now something that you are longing to hear.... Love Wilma
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