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"This is now bone of my bone and flesh of my flesh; She shall be called woman because she was taken out of man." "Therefore shall a man leave his father and his mother and shall cleave onto his wife and they shall be one flesh." (genesis chapter 2 verses 23 & 24) One flesh, one bone, all one body and soul, onto our lives it is now just you and I, my wife. All my pride comes from you, boo. You complete me!! Baby, we are meant to reach the heavens together. Meant to hold our vows well onto our spiritual journey. Spread your canvas let me paint our love, open your mind, what I know is not enough. Everlasting devotion, is the meat of my vow. I'm am yours for eternity, if you'll allow Long walks on the beach, our picnic under the willow tree. You're the inspiration behind so much of my poetry. " And Adam called his wife Eve because she was the mother of all the living." (genesis chapter 3 vs 20) Jared Pickett 2/28/2010 Asavvy1

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Date: 3/8/2010 3:31:00 AM
Jared..... Totally AWESOME.....Truely Beauitful
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Date: 3/5/2010 10:07:00 PM
This is SO NICE, Jared. What a lucky wife you have. By the way, I really would like to try your mirrored refrain but I am always just doing so many things in my life. Hopefully I will make time for it by the deadline. I love trying new forms and it looks like a challenge! LUv,Andrea
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:52:00 AM
Sounds like everlasting love to me. Nice tribute to your wife. What an uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments. Karen
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:49:00 AM
How wonderful to have a woman who inspires you to write great poetry, Jared! I'm so happy for you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/2/2010 9:33:00 AM
Quoting the Bible? Hmmmm... Been sick..Bad Lupus flares last couple months... Nice poem here Son keep up the good work...Love Dad
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:43:00 PM
Jared, I've been sitting here for 15 or 20 minutes reading your poem...trying to think of words to comment on it...I can't think of any in the English language to say...so I'll just say God BLess!!!! Marty
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:31:00 AM
beautifully romantic
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:01:00 AM
Like this inner poem JP 'Everlasting devotion, is the meat of my vow. I'm am yours for eternity, if you'll allow' NIce work .Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments.
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Date: 3/1/2010 7:31:00 AM
Boy oh boy have you got the gift of the gab and flow of the quill! A supreme piece of writing indeed! Kindest thoughts and onto the next...Anna-Marie.
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:46:00 AM
You go guy! the sacred and the profane...aye? which is which and why? And since a man wrote that book we would be believing it as true why? (grin) (tickle) Light & Love
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Date: 2/28/2010 10:03:00 PM
beautiful poem Jared..beautiful..Love at its core..I love the way you entwined passages from the bible and this sweet romantic poem,,you did a great job indeed..Charma
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Date: 2/28/2010 7:52:00 PM
WOW .. u have certainly written a masterpiece her Mr. J.. and one of my new favorites tonight... excellent ... luv "spread your canvas let me paint our love" ..now u are talking my language ..luv.. "Sweetheart" ...SOUP MAIL>>>>>>>
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Date: 2/28/2010 7:37:00 PM
Real nice one here, Jared! Are you getting married? If you are, my congratulations! This write is truly inspirational and a special dedication to the one you love. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:43:00 PM
Intresting you gave the meaning of 2 makes 1 a beautful out look from the bible. I also have to add quite romantic...
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:32:00 PM
Nice work Jared very understandable. --R. Emerald
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