Boney Maples

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Harp music for a late-autumn Monday |

bare the foliage of trees petals crumbling… split from boughs where ghosts of maples droop low, ashed view wanes--tilting Writing Challenge-Dodoitsu Contest Sponsor: Constance La France 10/01/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2020 11:09:00 AM

so lovely, dear!! Belated Congrats.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/7/2020 6:58:00 AM

You created a view of Autumn as it moves into winter with lovely expression. congrats on your first place win.

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2020 7:29:00 AM

Nette, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me.

Carol Mitra

Date: 10/4/2020 8:33:00 PM

Lovely poem Nette....Congrats on your win.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/4/2020 12:28:00 PM

Oh I like this a lot Nette! Congratulations! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2020 11:53:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 10/3/2020 9:30:00 AM

Very nice Nette.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/2/2020 1:15:00 AM

Enticing picture of ghostly bare trees. Best for a win ~~