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Bone Dry Without Him

. Went to the creek for inspiration, bone dry where is the spring? One Amazing Line Contest entry for Constance La France's latest contest Written by: Sara Kendrick December 6, 2010

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Date: 12/10/2010 10:36:00 AM
Awesome wiritng Sara, seems that the creek was not so dry after all ;-) I've truly enjoyed the read. Best of Luck in the Contest. Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 12/8/2010 1:07:00 PM
I really like this one, Glad I came to see it!!
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Date: 12/8/2010 12:55:00 PM
great line Sara... I've looked for my "spring" and could not find it before also. Lay
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Date: 12/6/2010 8:24:00 PM
I know the thought here my friend, good luck for a win with this thought provoking line. Thanks for your best wishes. Blessings Joy (Jew)
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:55:00 AM
Good luck with this entry. This was strong.
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:33:00 AM
Sara, all the best with this gem in Constance's contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 12/6/2010 8:42:00 AM
wonderful entry Sara, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:51:00 AM
We won't see spring for quite a while, but it looks like you found inspiration for a great monoku, Sara. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:47:00 AM
Nice thought, Good luck, Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:38:00 AM
An amazing line really. All the very best for the contest.
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:27:00 AM
Nice entry Sara... I like your image and form...have a great day...luv Michael
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