Bon Voyage

Bon voyage. Out to sea. A luxury cruise. Out to sea. Things UNKNOWN about this sea. Cruising away with warmth in tow One serene ocean was seen While venturing out alone on deck An orca had been noticed, a KILLER WHALE in its natural home. A habitat mostly UNKNOWN. Bon voyage killer whale BE AT PEACE

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Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 3/4/2015 7:41:00 AM

Made me think about my place, our place ...btw thanks for the comment Val...Peter

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 3/4/2015 8:15:00 AM

Thank you for your comment Peter

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/23/2015 2:53:00 PM

Hello Val, This one is a very interesting metaphor indeed as you've depicted. We humans so very often forget that we're not the only species in this vast world of ours -- and especially on the oceans. A Great Write!! Best Always, Gary

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 1/23/2015 6:14:00 PM

Thanks Gary. Much appreciated. Have a great weekend.