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Below is the poem entitled Bolt which was written by poet Carmen Castro. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A bolt of lighting strikes my soul 
A burst of energy a sudden jolt 

It's like strong hands just hugged me tight 
Within my darkness I see the light
I mourned my pride a thousand times
In my own silence just like a mime

I tread in tears but did not drown  
My will wouldn't let me and strength I found  

Here I stand a rejuvenated soul  
Keys in hand, in total control

Copyright © Carmen Castro

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 4:39:00 AM
    soooo positive loved every word,enjoying my read this morning,think I am going to have a wonderful day thanks Carmen

    Castro Avatar Carmen Castro
    Date: 9/26/2012 5:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your Welcome Richard : ) Have a great day