Boeing

sparkling and moving constellation in night's sky thunder kills silence

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:02:00 PM

Anytime, BL... I'll be here at the soup for the next 4 days... thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 11:34:00 AM

BL, I like the night and thunder. It does not silence the moment. I love this haiku. I like the light show and sound... LINDA

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/15/2015 12:00:00 PM

Thanks a lot my *friend for reading my poem and putting comment on it. At night when thunder continues means there's no silence. Really that's. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/8/2015 8:40:00 AM

- The third line is strong: "thunder kills silence" !!! - Great haiku, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/8/2015 8:47:00 AM

Thanks a lot again for your lovely comment, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2015 4:55:00 PM

oh yes, they sure do thunder, don't they? I have seen and head them!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/8/2015 7:49:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

David Meade

Date: 1/7/2015 1:58:00 PM

a night storm -- power and light, lovely my dear friend. 7

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/8/2015 7:49:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

Eve Roper

Date: 1/7/2015 11:04:00 AM

Mr. Devnath, a 7 , true meaning in a few words

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/7/2015 11:08:00 AM

Many thanks my lovely friend for reading my poem and for your nice comment. Loved always,bl