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'body Heat'

a chill in the air two sets of hands wandering…. scorching body heat
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:02:00 PM
naughty but nice. one question is this one person or two :-)
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Date: 1/9/2011 12:15:00 PM
The adventure of two can sure raise temperatures, oh how I wish. Sexy sensuous Senyru Wilma....:)
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:06:00 AM
Groete, u've named it, Wilma! Great Senryu!...Ek hoop jy is om goed te doen en jy het 'n goeie week! Al die beste...Gert :)
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Date: 1/8/2011 11:15:00 AM
AHHHH My dear Wilma, you know what Im thinking now.... This is my hand reaching across the POND for yours!!!!!! warm , steamy and inviting all in one... Bravo my dear...Love Michael
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Date: 1/8/2011 11:03:00 AM
great poem! you've managed to give so much in such few words. love it.
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Date: 1/8/2011 6:53:00 AM
Very passionate work..Good one..Glad that I stopped by..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 1/8/2011 6:13:00 AM
Oh, yes, this is great Wilma ! I just love the terse writes, they can say so much ! much love, james
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Date: 1/7/2011 10:29:00 PM
OOH LA LA!!
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Date: 1/7/2011 4:56:00 PM
I am so there .. where is this heat ..body or otherwise Wilma... deeply sensuous and passionate luv.. my kinda poetry girl... way to go with a steamy Senryu on a happy weekend ..luv..
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Date: 1/7/2011 1:10:00 PM
Reminds me of cold nights when lovers huddle together without feeling the chill. Lovely, Wilma! Best to you, Carolyn
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Date: 1/7/2011 12:21:00 PM
ok i can deal with this one. john
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Date: 1/7/2011 12:07:00 PM
words and thoughts simply implied.. what a wonder, wilma.. best winning streaks in the contest..:) nette
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Date: 1/7/2011 11:36:00 AM
I love when my hands wander across a willing, feminin landscape - and yes, the temperature normally does rise. Nicely penned, Wilma - now, I need to go find a cold shower. Joe
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