Body Dance

Enjoys by hearing legs,fingers and body dance own music is on Written by: bldevnath September: 17th 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" BL. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/22/2011 1:32:00 AM

Thanks for giving congratulation to me. Am waiting to congratulate you more and more for your win. Pl. give me chance. Thanks, bl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/18/2011 8:21:00 PM

with haiku a simple way to approach it is to ask can I take a snapshot containing the content? the grammatically connected 2 lines usually contain the subject and the scene, line 3 using makes a mental leap which does relate to lines 1 &2 and could be say another bit of sensory input to draw the reader into what the poet was LOOKING at..hope this is a bit of help..light& love and thanks so much for stopping by!!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/19/2011 11:25:00 AM

Many thanks for your stopping by. My friend, I truthfully want to say that what comes out of flow of thoughts, I try to write as it is, but many times I succeed. Thanks for your nice comment. bl

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/18/2011 11:06:00 AM

nicely described. congratulations on your win!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/19/2011 11:26:00 AM

Thanks my friend for your comment and for giving congratulation. bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 9:24:00 AM

CONGRATS BL ON WONDERFUL FIFTH PLACE WIN LUV..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2011 3:48:00 AM

BLD,. a nice congratulations on your win, *<:-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/17/2011 10:44:00 AM

Your few words take me to the dance with all th magic that being in someone's arms can bring. To float around to music is wonderful. Nicely done dear friend!