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Body,Mind,And Soul

To nourish breaths and twirl away when island counts beachcomber years folder and pen will imprint scripts of journey’s tales sucked from my womb with drawings and poems handwritten, filling the cavity of time, of rainbow stars. For private care, need I bring toiletries? oh , Mother Earth offers all herbal scents, except for undies... that’s a load full; just maybe, they’ll wrap me from the cold or guise them as hats for summer’s fare. Forget the playlist as necessity, the music of waves, seagulls and leaves is finer than orchestra or blues combined; a serenade of night chirps will invite the lull of twilight, the hop of morn. In between survival and lush of days, Rumi’s journal would embed new seedlings opening chakras with tender wildness for pauses while I lay on moon’s hammock, enshrined in a banquet for body, mind and soul. What Would You Take Contest, Shadow Hamilton 10.30.2013

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Date: 11/12/2013 5:53:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2013 9:50:00 AM
nette, Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :):)
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:43:00 PM
congrats.. LINDA
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Date: 11/5/2013 8:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win! the wonder of the world penned throughout, brilliant indeed!! Blessings, Stacey
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:10:00 PM
a unique perspective on the theme.....congrats on a fine win
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Date: 11/4/2013 11:19:00 AM
Two Thumbs up for this brilliant piece. Very creative. Big big congratulations on your great win!! hurray!!! big hug from me!! (^______^) Bandila'y Iwagayway, Kay Nette na mahusay, Sa pagsusulat ng mga tula, Siya ay isang dakilang makata!!!
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Date: 11/4/2013 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement nette love, well done xx
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Date: 11/3/2013 6:11:00 PM
beautiful poem...your images are always so uniquely penned....congrats on your win :) hugs
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Date: 11/3/2013 4:54:00 PM
Enjoyed reading again nette...congratulations
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Date: 11/3/2013 4:39:00 PM
Congrats Nette ....Seren
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Date: 11/3/2013 3:10:00 PM
Congrats dear friend, for this wonderful piece..Great write...
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Date: 11/3/2013 2:06:00 PM
super poem Nette congrats on placing 2nd
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Date: 10/31/2013 5:31:00 PM
I love the imagery of the moon s hammock deat and I love Rumi too..Lovely post
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Date: 10/30/2013 11:24:00 AM
Nice revolutionary image adorned with philosophical tastes. Excellent color of your magic pen inked in to this excellent poem. Enjoyed a lot, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/30/2013 10:59:00 AM
This was uplifting & very touching. You know how to truly value what matters in the end. What you can/can't take with you. Excellent.
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Date: 10/30/2013 9:30:00 AM
I think this is the best one I have read so far! Outstanding work Nette.
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Date: 10/30/2013 5:25:00 AM
You are very selective of the things that your passion needs, nette
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:05:00 AM
Nette, a beautifully written poem that lies in the shadows of Rumi's genius. Brilliant!
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Date: 10/29/2013 10:37:00 PM
I simply agree with Russell and jack and the lovely comments below...winner..your mind is beautiful as you are....
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Date: 10/29/2013 7:24:00 PM
This should do it for you Nette... I haven't seen the other entries but this is a winner for certain! Hugs Jack xoxox
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Date: 10/29/2013 5:03:00 PM
I would surely choose you for a winner if it was my contest to judge! I already do have you as a winner in my heart my friend, this is a tremendous poem! My favorite part of this poem has to be after I read it all the way through, "...while I lay on moon's hammock," this is perfect Nette! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/29/2013 4:18:00 PM
beautifully drawn piece
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Date: 10/29/2013 3:39:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed perusing your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:56:00 PM
- Learn to listen, feel and see ..... - A poem that provides "food for the soul" .... afterwards wanted dessert. - Beautiful,Nette. - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:51:00 PM
My chakras, all opened wide/ For the energy of your poem to pass through/ Captivating my heart and my mind/ Thus there is nothing else left for it to do! Excellent piece of poetry! Thank you!
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