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Below is the poem entitled BODY,MIND,AND SOUL which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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To nourish breaths and twirl away when island counts beachcomber years folder and pen will imprint scripts of journey’s tales sucked from my womb with drawings and poems handwritten, filling the cavity of time, of rainbow stars. For private care, need I bring toiletries? oh , Mother Earth offers all herbal scents, except for undies... that’s a load full; just maybe, they’ll wrap me from the cold or guise them as hats for summer’s fare. Forget the playlist as necessity, the music of waves, seagulls and leaves is finer than orchestra or blues combined; a serenade of night chirps will invite the lull of twilight, the hop of morn. In between survival and lush of days, Rumi’s journal would embed new seedlings opening chakras with tender wildness for pauses while I lay on moon’s hammock, enshrined in a banquet for body, mind and soul. What Would You Take Contest, Shadow Hamilton 10.30.2013

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:50:00 AM
    nette, Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :):)

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:43:00 PM
    congrats.. LINDA

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Congrats on your win! the wonder of the world penned throughout, brilliant indeed!! Blessings, Stacey

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 5:10:00 PM
    a unique perspective on the theme.....congrats on a fine win

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Two Thumbs up for this brilliant piece. Very creative. Big big congratulations on your great win!! hurray!!! big hug from me!! (^______^) Bandila'y Iwagayway, Kay Nette na mahusay, Sa pagsusulat ng mga tula, Siya ay isang dakilang makata!!!

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 11:18:00 AM
    Wow, talking about spontaneous crafts, Nette i feel so ingenius masterpiece looks like that of Leonardo's, i keep gettin goosebumbs as you lay down the pieces..:) #Huggs lols

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement nette love, well done xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:11:00 PM
    beautiful poem...your images are always so uniquely penned....congrats on your win :) hugs

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading again nette...congratulations

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Congrats Nette ....Seren

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 3:10:00 PM
    Congrats dear friend, for this wonderful piece..Great write...

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:53:00 PM
    Congrats my soup Queen, loved this poem from the first time I lay eyes on it, well done my friend, xxx

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:06:00 PM
    super poem Nette congrats on placing 2nd

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 5:31:00 PM
    I love the imagery of the moon s hammock deat and I love Rumi too..Lovely post

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 11:24:00 AM
    Nice revolutionary image adorned with philosophical tastes. Excellent color of your magic pen inked in to this excellent poem. Enjoyed a lot, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 10:59:00 AM
    This was uplifting & very touching. You know how to truly value what matters in the end. What you can/can't take with you. Excellent.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 9:30:00 AM
    I think this is the best one I have read so far! Outstanding work Nette.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 5:25:00 AM
    You are very selective of the things that your passion needs, nette

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:05:00 AM
    Nette, a beautifully written poem that lies in the shadows of Rumi's genius. Brilliant!