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Bob Wire

As a kid, I was told To beware and not touch If I ever encountered Bob Wire. This warning was something I took quite to heart So avoiding it was my desire. It took many years ‘Til I learned that the word Wasn’t “Bob” but was “barbed” with an “r;” And that knowledge made sense For a danger named Bob Seemed both harmless and rather bizarre. I saw some today On the top of a fence And remembered my enemy Bob. As I chuckled, I thought That just being a kid Is a challenging, difficult job!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/2/2012 7:38:00 PM
Another beautiful write ilene. Another favorite of mine. Your poems are awesome.
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:18:00 PM
oh, my, another GREAT poem on something so simple and yet so interesting. I used to think they were saying "sacrament gym" instead of "gem" for the little message we took in church prior to taking sacrament. And I believed "there's a bad moon on the rise" sung by Creedance Clearwater was saying "there's a bathroom on the right" it's great fun to think it is something other than what you are really hearing!
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Date: 11/29/2012 4:33:00 PM
Excellent 6-line verses... again, with sublime cadence and rhyming. And what a lovely story! From now on I will call it 'bob wire' in memory of you! Well done Ilene!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/29/2012 4:11:00 PM
Bob Wire is my friend, taught me not to pretend to be something that I'm surely not. I'd cross the line taking what wasn't mine. Thinking that I would never get caught.
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