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Boat Ride

Boat Ride Lead by unseen hand through watery forest, Drifting silently among sunken glades Where sun warmed breezes kiss rippled waters, 'Tween quiet banks the living river runs. Dipping ducks feed and swim in sibling groups Where passing willows cast their shifting shade. Fish glide, careless, through their watery world. The boaters, not heeding, go their way; Not seeing the aquatic world beneath. Nor knowing the river's old rhythmic song, Only the sound of their own strident voices And sight of their preconfigured time. Barry Stebbings 21/05/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/30/2017 4:23:00 PM
The sun seduces the water and caresses the depth of the boat.cool!
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Date: 7/3/2017 1:27:00 AM
Love the imagery you pinned here :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/4/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you for reading my work, Debbie. I am pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry
Date: 6/15/2016 10:49:00 AM
Barry, thank you for joining my contest.... skat
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/15/2016 4:36:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT. Enjoyed it. Barry.
Date: 6/12/2016 7:07:00 PM
nicely penned, beautiful imagery ,congrats on the win Barry
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/13/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Francine.
Date: 6/12/2016 4:55:00 PM
this is really beautiful, Barry. Congrats on your win with this gem.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/13/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea.
Date: 5/25/2016 1:03:00 PM
This is so nicely descriptive... oh the beauty the boaters will miss, not seeing what is beneath the surface. .. really love this.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/25/2016 4:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Becca.
Date: 5/22/2016 7:17:00 AM
awesome :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/22/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thank you very much, Casarah.
Date: 5/21/2016 7:05:00 PM
Barry, this is B E A U T I F U L and I give it a big 7 ~
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/22/2016 5:39:00 AM
Thank You very much, Broken Wings. Barry
Date: 5/21/2016 4:16:00 PM
Enticing descriptions in this work. Sounds like your in Florida? I sense in the choice of your words you are a careful writer. Thank you for reading me today. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/21/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Maurice. You are right that I am a careful writer but I live in the U.K. Barry.

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