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Blushing Blossoms

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You lay me down beside a bubbling stream As Spring enchants us in a lover's dream You hold me as I watch the bubbles dance The cadence of a song filled with romance From face you tease away a raven tress With longing eyes, my body you undress Your lips touch mine in meeting graced with bliss I'm lost to all around me, save your kiss You water me with love, your flower fair To see me bloom, my petals soft you bare With gentle touch you go where none has gone Then taste the honeyed dew your love has won Like bubbles of the stream, I burst in glee The blush of love in bloom you wake in me Eileen Manassian

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Casarah Nance

Date: 6/28/2015 7:26:00 PM

The blush of love in bloom...oh every petal unfolds into a blossom of beauty with your write! This was super romantic and wonderful to read ;)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/8/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thank you for your post on my Blushing Blossoms poem, Cas. Very sweet of you. I always appreciate the visits. Hugs

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 6/28/2015 1:12:00 PM

Eileen, this beauty blew me away. Wonderful write!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/9/2015 10:53:00 AM

Thank you, Ndaba. So kind of you to visit.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 8:43:00 AM

But did you go swimming??? I know how you love the water.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/24/2015 5:15:00 PM

A beautiful, blooming passion, Eileen! I'm enjoying your sonnets...hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/24/2015 12:40:00 PM

- A wonderful romantic poem, dear Eileen - If we humans were just as fearlessly as infatuation, we would be invincible :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/24/2015 1:27:00 PM

- Wishing you a happy holiday ..... (I'm envious !!! :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:16:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. I'm now enjoyed a short vacation in Cyprus. Haven't been very active in the past few days. Thanks for the visit. Hugs

David Meade

Date: 6/23/2015 12:49:00 PM

The love and passion here is soft, gentle, and filled with a deep happiness . . . even the bubbles of the stream give testimony of this ardent and wonderful love. I have missed you LO. 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:16:00 PM

This is the poem for the Bubbles Contest...I reworked some of it. Thanks for the visit, Dear. I have missed you as well.

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/22/2015 8:17:00 AM

Passion and romance where you excel at...this is another of your delightful writes, Eileen! A 7. Hugs! Kim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:17:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I Appreciate the visit and kind words.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/22/2015 8:09:00 AM

Hi Eileen, I hope you are having a good day.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:18:00 PM

Shopping and a meal in an Italian restaurant. It wasn't bad. :) Hugs

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/22/2015 5:15:00 AM

Smooth and gentle, lovely Sonnet, Eileen. You really use this form well. Viv x

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:18:00 PM

Thank you, Viv. It has become my favorite form to write in. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2015 11:26:00 AM

The mellowness of your words and imagery make this a most romantic sonnet. The final couplet is beautiful. Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:19:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. I'm glad you could relate to the feelings in this piece.

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/21/2015 10:58:00 AM

Your emotions electrify the intensity of this piece taking the reader confidentially into your thoughts as romantic sexual feelings surface within the reading. Emile.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:19:00 PM

Your post is absolutely lovely, Emile. Thanks ever so much. I haven't been around much in the last few days. I'm on holiday in Cyprus. I will catch up soon. Hugs

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/21/2015 10:00:00 AM

Eileen, this is fantastic! The imagery is so beautiful and romantic. I really like this! Love, Kim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:20:00 PM

:) Thanks so much for the visit, Kim. These are very sweet words you have left for me. hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/21/2015 9:11:00 AM

You are very good with this form Eileen. I enjoyed the flow, rhythm and passionate content in this piece. Ohh la la "YRH"=Your Royal Hotness!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2015 1:21:00 PM

YRH....I like it very much. Thanks for the visit, dear. I appreciate it.