Blushing

(06/11/2011) It was started under early November’s fog You picked up chat by talking ‘bout dogs The next day, under the pine tree, we sat on a log After a hug you gave me a box “Inside is my heart” you said to me He leant his back against the tree Was excited, but was worried if it was a hoax Disappointed! I only saw white plain card inside the box But then I was blushing I felt blood rushing to my head “Be my girl!” the card said More blushing, My blood-racing sped up intensely I answered it with my fervent kiss Two days of two years of knowing each other, Is this love or he’s just too good in attracting girl’s heart? What is love anyway? As long as I bliss this, he is all I wish

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Michael Smith

Date: 4/29/2012 4:46:00 PM

Very uplifting!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/5/2012 10:12:00 AM

Yes my dear sweet Dinda you can use an older poem for my contest as long as its 12 lines max.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2012 5:54:00 PM

It sounds like love to ME. cute poem, great title. I really enjoyed reading this.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/6/2012 3:33:00 AM

Very passionate write.No new poems?

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/26/2011 8:38:00 PM

I think this must all be true, you sound as though you are in love! I hope your happiness lasts a lifetime

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2011 11:56:00 AM

Love sweet love..........like it.What is love,you know.. when you find it.OXOX Love Anne-Lise

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/26/2011 5:18:00 AM

LOve is one of the most amazing emotions that there is.. And you have described it perfectly on all sides... love to you all day Michael

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/25/2011 11:46:00 PM

Dinda, I absolutely love this. We sometimes fret too much on what love is suppose to be instead of enjoying the time we get to spend with the person that brings a little happiness to our lives. Merry Christmas to you too ;) Really enjoyed your write this morning ;) Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2011 9:42:00 PM

Dinda... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

M.I.A .

Date: 12/24/2011 1:08:00 AM

yes, what is love anyway? when it comes to try to define it, we realize it's undefinable. Loved the passion you put here Dinda, simple yet very appealing.

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/23/2011 7:15:00 AM

"Caution" love is dangerous movetoo fast and you can lose it, move too slow and you can lose it. take it in moderation. first with words next with time and then when your through blushing more serious things.