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Blushed Naivety

Her lips still blushed a youthful favor amidst burnished summer's spirit, scintillating 'tween impetuous kisses whilst naiveté blooms gullible bosoms, embraced afore a chill nature withering budding wildflowers taking precedence o'er accorded doctrines farthermost harmonious freewill

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/25/2016 9:19:00 PM

smiling biggie. "taking precedence o'er accorded doctrines farthermost harmonious freewill" Love it. Right there at the intersection of how things are and how things REALLY are;-) ~j

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/21/2016 2:19:00 PM

Very engaging poem, Paloma. I agree w/PD on the prose. And you do love to do a little poetic parry w/passion and pragmatism dueling one another. Touche. Very expressive poetry, that unfurls the mind. Love your work as always. Live long and prosper. Much love to you and yours. RW

Paloma P
Date: 10/22/2016 5:24:00 AM

You picked up on that, eh? :) Who's PD? Don't confuse me, it's too early in the morn. Thanks so much Freddie.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/21/2016 2:23:00 PM

Btw, I often have Cher's "Walking in Memphis" rolling around the old noggin'. Much love always.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/19/2016 5:37:00 PM

Hi Paloma, an excellent piece of poetry once again. I often look back into my late spring and summer of my life. Love seemed to change as each season came to my life. Now is my favourite period. The autumn of my years shall come soon and love sings. Your words sing onto the canvas of my mind, my own memories stir, Another gem Paloma. You let your thoughts come forth with some wonderful content. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 6:37:00 PM

Many thanks Mike for your attentive reviews, glad you enjoyed this one, it holds deep meaning for me.

Anthony Mark

Date: 10/10/2016 4:38:00 PM

Wonderfull write, ...well done....Ian

Paloma P
Date: 10/10/2016 5:30:00 PM

Thanks Ian, much appreciated.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/10/2016 7:45:00 AM

Lovely...a delight to read; the title is absolutely perfect. You manage to take this reader back in time when love was young and innocent, little realizing then that roses have thorns, too! Regards // paul

Paloma P
Date: 10/10/2016 8:00:00 AM

I'm thrilled it took you there Paul. Ah, yes those nasty thorns, we learn soon enough, don't we? Many thanks!

Chris Green

Date: 10/6/2016 7:06:00 AM

There is a hint of sadness in this wonderful piece. Oh to be young again and experience all that love has to offer before the years pass and the flowers wilt in the heart. This is amazing Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 2:49:00 PM

Yes, if we could turn back time. Now I'll have Cher in my head all day. :) Thanks so much Chris.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2016 7:26:00 PM

Paloma, i like the approach of your wording and writing skills. Rich and tasteful. LINDA

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 2:48:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind thoughts, thanks so much Linda.