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Blurred Beauty

Ahh to let emotions wash over me Happened so fast yet so far away Being left to live in my own reality The price my fragile heart had to pay When touched by the silvery moon Allowing his beam to caress my face As he told me perhaps it was too soon Engulfing me in his soft warm embrace Colorful fireworks burst in the skies As all others watched them in awe When glistening tears fell from my eyes While a blurred beauty was all that I saw
8/1/2020

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Date: 8/26/2020 8:48:00 AM
Title drew me straight in -- and yet another win! Very well done, Poetess! Lovely poetry. With much affection. :) john
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Date: 8/4/2020 3:27:00 PM
I love this, Brenda. It's a well deserved win from Brian!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/4/2020 4:18:00 PM
Andrea I’m so glad you liked it! Thank you!:)
Date: 8/2/2020 6:15:00 AM
A gentle touch caressing my mind. I love it. God bless you always
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/4/2020 4:18:00 PM
Gina thank you!:)
Date: 8/2/2020 5:04:00 AM
Superb poetry my friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/4/2020 4:18:00 PM
Vijay thank you my friend!:)
Date: 8/1/2020 10:37:00 PM
This is delicately beautiful. Exquisitely done as usual.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/4/2020 4:18:00 PM
Ahh my county friend! Thank you so very much!:)
Date: 8/1/2020 5:42:00 PM
Ooh, love this, Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/4/2020 4:17:00 PM
Thank you John I appreciate your comment and read!;)

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