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Blues Blues in a sky of blue billow from lonesome grooves Brother your lone harp weeps Bandage my wounds soul deep Belt out that heartache please Bring me down to my knees beside these Christmas blues written 11/19/15 for Kim's Pleiades, Please! Contest

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Date: 12/1/2015 6:17:00 AM
This reminds me of why you are on my fav poets list...Congrats and Merry Christmas my friend! - Tim
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Date: 11/30/2015 3:15:00 AM
Congrats Rhonda.. wonderful write n win!
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Date: 11/29/2015 8:25:00 AM
Lovely, Rhonda. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/28/2015 6:56:00 PM
Rhonda, congrats on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:25:00 PM
Rhonda, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE
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Date: 11/28/2015 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda
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Date: 11/27/2015 11:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rhonda! Eve
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Date: 11/27/2015 6:14:00 PM
I loved this entry Rhonda. So happy to see it so high on the winner's list. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:47:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/27/2015 3:23:00 PM
Rhonda, I'm so glad you entered my contest! I love the rhythm in this. Congrats on your win and for learning a new poetry form! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/19/2015 1:53:00 PM
"Bandage my wounds soul deep"...wow, pround feelings in your words Rhonda. So happy to see you active again. This is a wonderful entry for the contest and I hope to see it high on the winner's list! Blessings, Connie
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/19/2015 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! It's good to be back and writing again. I hope all is well with you...hugs, Rhonda
Date: 11/19/2015 1:05:00 PM
Beautifully penned Rhonda so great to see your muse is back in full flow:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/19/2015 3:21:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! I was trying to channel Elvis...lol.

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