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Bluebird's Gone

Springtime put a spring in my step Bluebird brought bright bars of music next I saw her sip at the faithful fountain; sing soulfully As I prayed: wishing the world was well, more certain About the value of various voices: bird, boy, girl, gadfly ... I threw something out the window, absent-mindedly What happened next is sad, sadder still, all birds are hurting ... For you see, what I threw out so absent-mindedly Was a careless word: "Shush, shush, you sing the same old song!" Bluebird looked and looked, a long minute without a note - And as silently as she had surrendered her songs at my abode She flew off in a fluttery flummox. She has not been seen Near me. I have been so sorry since, prayed in between - But my vicinity may welcome the Trinity, but not birds this season A word - my careless words - have wounded wren and robin Bluejay and finch, Baltimore Oriole and Barn Owl ... They stay away ... And the Mockingbird sent word with Guinea Fowl That I am a moody man, melodramatic, even erratic (Birds have forgiven; they have fathomed I'm a fettered hummingbird).

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Date: 4/15/2017 8:03:00 PM
The imagery is lovely, your words poignant and meaningful. To err is human, acceptance and love are blessings for all. A terrific, thoughtful piece Anil:) lynnxx
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Date: 4/14/2017 4:23:00 PM
Dearest Readers, U see how powerful words are: the encouraging words & conversation raises more questions about whether I am doing enough, to show God's creation, that I am walking with Jesus. So a BIG thank you ... merci beaucoup, Grazie, Danke, Sheshe', Shukriyah, dhanyabadh. I have a Psalm I wanted to post ... Many EASTER blessings in Beloved Christ.
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Date: 4/14/2017 2:37:00 PM
Indeed, in the end, what blame have we for the birds? From a good place, this poem swims in the air for me, or does it flow through that air? Air, while not a liquid, is still a fluid.
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Date: 4/14/2017 10:07:00 AM
Anil, this lovely, very symbolic poem has so much to say--so creatively! Janice
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Date: 4/14/2017 4:48:00 AM
Well-composed, with some great imagery and turn of phrase. Especially liked the "fluttery flummox". Nice write. Regards, John.
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Date: 4/12/2017 2:57:00 PM
Dear Anil. Hello. There is no clumsy hummingbird here. I see a bluebird with wings. Excuse me a poet with wings and a pen. This is marvelous in every way. We readers see the alliteration. Well done in its entirety. Honestly
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Anil Deo
Date: 4/12/2017 3:03:00 PM
missed you; folks are kind, but we all need encouragement trying to be poets. Shalom, shalom! Forgiven!

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