Bluebirds

lavender blossoms surround a pair of bluebirds wispy clouds float by

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Julia Ward

Date: 4/25/2015 8:09:00 AM

That's interesting imagery, Joseph. Julia, :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2015 2:19:00 PM

hey, I see you did two tanka. tell me which tanka is NOT in my contest and I will read that one!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 2:00:00 AM

What a lovely image you have created in your wonderful haiku, Joseph. It's so easy to picture this scene when reading your words. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/14/2015 3:24:00 PM

I like this, Joseph. Nice image...motionless bluebirds framed by blossoms...clouds the only thing moving behind...surreal..Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2015 9:28:00 PM

Pretty as a picture!

John Lawless

Date: 3/12/2015 5:15:00 PM

This little gem made me stop and enjoy the visual that filled my mind on reading. This is really beautiful Joseph.

Willow Lawrence

Date: 3/12/2015 4:32:00 PM

Beautiful imagery!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/12/2015 3:57:00 PM

Oh this is a beauty of an image. Nicely done.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2015 2:52:00 PM

beautiful imagery Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/12/2015 2:08:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Joseph! Love, Kim