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Blueberry Soda Eye Mist

stinging blueberry soda eye mist that burns the eyes and gives way to the nose as less than harmless now you see the teeny tiny little swimming niggles it won't give you the warm and friendly wiggles it's misty blueberry soda smells great with a little nose burn but you can't sniff out where its coming from you rub your eyes, surprise what an eye-burner it makes it hurt increasingly extra you scratch your head and look around to see there is no one around what to do who to tell oh, what the hell!

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Date: 5/19/2017 2:17:00 PM
Verlecia, you have a delightful sense of humor and it shows in this fun poem:) Amitiés
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Verlecia Fields
Date: 5/21/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thank you - If i didn't laugh a little - i would have to cry a lot more (???)
Date: 5/19/2017 12:08:00 PM
A fun poem Verlecia...I can feel the niggles tickling my nose
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Date: 5/21/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thank you - and yes i hope i got them all out Q_Q

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