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Blue Water Reflections

Blue water mirror Mountains soar above the lake Seen again, painted below Sitting on the edge of the sky Such beauty to be seen twice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/27/2010 2:52:00 PM
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I can see the reflection in the words before me! Lovely, Barbara!! ~ :) Congratulations!
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 7/27/2010 6:53:00 AM
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Congratulations Barbara on your win in Brian Strand's contest "High Fives" . Love, Carol
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Brandee Augustus
Date: 7/26/2010 6:37:00 PM
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Really really love your last two lines. Just starting with blue as your description and branching off to something much bigger was really nice. Congratulations on your win and thank you for commenting on my poem.
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Elaine George
Date: 7/26/2010 8:44:00 AM
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Breathtaking Tanka, Barbara. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 7/25/2010 8:18:00 PM
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My Dear Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR beautiful POEM Winning in Brian's Contest I can walk outback and see YOUR POEM in Reality Superb POETIC Artistry LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
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Rick Parise
Date: 7/25/2010 5:27:00 PM
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A reflectin of beauty , so very nice~Enjoyed this one. CONGRATS on your win in Brians contest.~God bless~Rick
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/5/2010 6:30:00 PM
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Another beauty,.....I hope this is for the High Five contest, Barbara. This is lovely!! :)
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Daver Austin
Date: 7/5/2010 8:36:00 AM
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Wonderful Tanka! "Sitting on the edge of the sky." Love it. Love, daver
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/5/2010 8:12:00 AM
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Oh, I like the way you capture the reflected image in your last line. Great tanka, Barbara! Love, Carolyn
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/5/2010 7:26:00 AM
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Great descriptive write that plaints a scene that puts me in that place..Sara
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