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Blue Water On Ledge

blue water on ledge dribbling down vertical side… mist forms at bottom Russell Sivey Contest: any haiku will do Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A 7/17/2013

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Mitch White

Date: 7/23/2013 5:47:00 AM

Nice form in this, grace-full. Congrats to you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:36:00 PM

NIcely done, Russell. BIG congrats to you.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/22/2013 6:43:00 PM

nice visuals! good 2 part structure too. congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/22/2013 4:56:00 PM

Sounds like you were sitting by a waterfall (or wading?)...Great observation and a very fine haiku... Congrats my friend! - Tim

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 11:33:00 AM

Very nice Russell.Congrats on your win.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:35:00 AM

Russell congratulations on your fabulous haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2013 6:04:00 AM

Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:05:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality, Russell - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/21/2013 10:51:00 PM

Superb. Many congrats Russell.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 7:58:00 PM

Hello Russell :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**

Kash Poet

Date: 7/17/2013 7:52:00 PM

Very nice Russell!Love the imagery.

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/17/2013 2:44:00 PM

Nothing more to say... IT'S A WINNER my dear friend! cheers, Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2013 2:30:00 PM

Nice one!

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/17/2013 9:57:00 AM

Yes! Embracing the waterfall songs! Love this!