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Blue Tinge of Moonlight

blue tinge of moonlight, reflected in your green eyes, romantically teasing. I wish to wallow in its depths, soak up the love, surrender to your wanting.... sparkling glints of light portraying your inner glow, bodies swaying together, caressing desires. quicker than lightening strikes... moonlight pierces your heart strings. September 7 2017 Contest: Russell Sivey's Moonlight Delight.

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/11/2017 10:36:00 PM

I really liked this, very romantic, and congrats are in order I see! Well deserved!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/10/2017 11:10:00 AM

A big congratulations

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/9/2017 11:31:00 PM

Congratulation on your win, Seren with your beautiful poem.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/9/2017 4:53:00 PM

Ah, so romantic Seren. How lovely this is! Congratulations on your top wIn! : )

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 4:14:00 PM

Seren, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/9/2017 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Eve.... Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 1:57:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful 1st place, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/9/2017 4:44:00 PM

Wow I am surprised thankyou Anne-lise...Seren

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/9/2017 10:30:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on a most deserving victory...

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/9/2017 8:16:00 AM

Gorgeous and well-penned, Seren - just love this! Congrats on your win! :-)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/9/2017 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations Seren :)

John Michaels

Date: 9/9/2017 5:50:00 AM

Powerful and emotive write, Seren. Love the personification of the moon as the object of your desire! Congratulations on your First Place win! Regards, John.