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Blue State of Mind

I feel like I'm locked in a room with blue walls Blue curtains And blue sheet covers Everything around me is blue Even though their all in different colours I was in a war with myself and those battles were lost And my happiness was at cost And I was the fool counting all the flaws I guess all my insecurities are my fault If you ever look into my eyes You'll know that I'm in a blue state of mind

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Skat A

Date: 2/19/2015 6:28:00 PM

King M.:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Skat A

Date: 2/13/2015 11:45:00 PM

KING, HAPPY VALENTINES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

King Mogashoa
Date: 2/14/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thanks for making me feel so welcome I'm a 16 year old poet and rapper from a small township in South Africa called Lebowakgomo

King Mogashoa
Date: 2/14/2015 8:40:00 AM

Thanks for making me feel welcome I'm a 16 year old rapper and poet from a small place in South Africa called Lebowakgomo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2015 10:46:00 PM

King M, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Valentines day, with your New Poet Friend! Happy Valentine's @-> LINDA <-@

King Mogashoa
Date: 2/14/2015 8:35:00 AM

Thanks nut I'm the one who's going to need pointers

Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2015 12:34:00 PM

good write, King Mogashoa, feelings can really show your true colors. 7

King Mogashoa
Date: 2/14/2015 8:30:00 AM

Thanks I'm still a begginer so it's great for me to get a comment that's positive.