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Blue Star For You

Tonight I leave my pillow, to walk in dreams of you. Where sentient sails doth billow in stars the deepest blue. Around the Moon to Saturn's rings, capture the warming Sun. Tip toe the moonbeams to Venus who my love hath won. Engulfed in a myriad of stars are beating hearts and wings. To herald all thou art to me and the joy it brings. In this night where rainbows hide from the beckoning day. I indulge myself in truest love and within your heart shall stay. Clasping the bluest star to my pillow I descend. To lie aside this heart that our dreams may blend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/21/2010 1:13:00 PM
Wonderful.. Simply wonderful.. This is going to the Favorites...
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Date: 12/21/2010 11:56:00 AM
What type of Rispetto you have penned, Daniel, Please let me know the more about this form
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Date: 12/21/2010 8:59:00 AM
More beautiful romantic words I have not read my friend Daniel.. these eloquent and emotional lines stir the soul from fantasy to reality's love... most touching piece and a new fav ..with luv..
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