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A day as clear as glass, no clouds in sight. O- s e r e n i t y, is the cool summer wind, the sweet air smells of the sea. This beach such a vast open space. Like jagged spears white birds streak the sky, and the blue sea k i s s e s my painted toes. ____________________________ September 19, 2016 Poetry/Etheree/Blue Sea Kisses Copyright Protected, ID 16-831-134-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Submitted to Contest # 207 sponsor, Brian Strand Eighth Place

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Date: 9/20/2016 7:39:00 PM
I really like this, Constance. Not sure which contest it was for. Brian's? Anyway, BIG congrats to you, my friend.
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Date: 9/20/2016 11:14:00 AM
how incredible is this poem, constance... congrats on your fine win!..huggs
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:06:00 AM
you are always so great at Etheree Broken Wings- you always carry such a remarkable flow and I remember reading this before and I don't know why I didn't comment but I am now :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/20/2016 7:41:00 AM
Congrats, Constance. I enjoyed your poem; it makes me wistful for summer. Agnes
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Date: 9/19/2016 10:50:00 PM
This puts me in a vacation kinda mood.
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Date: 9/19/2016 9:16:00 PM
This poem really makes me sad that summer will be over in 3 days, A wonderful ode to summer, Constance. Your feet? Hissss!
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Date: 9/19/2016 8:48:00 PM
Hello! What a classical poem, wow... Very well executed with great power of imaginary. I like this write. Last line is touching the sky.
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:07:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery Constance I really like the Etheree form:-) hugs Jan xx
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