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Blue Sea Kisses

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A day as clear as wine, no clouds in sight. Oh- s e r e n i t y, is the cool summer wind, the sweet air smells of the sea. This beach such a vast open space. Like jagged spears white birds streak the sky and the blue sea k i s s e s - my painted toes. ________________________________ July 23, 2016 Poetry/Etheree/Blue Sea Kisses Copyright Protected, ID 16-811-040-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the Premier contest, Etheree sponsor, Kim Merryman First Place

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/28/2016 4:23:00 AM

Beautiful, picturesque imagery!! Congrats BW, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/27/2016 7:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.....

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/27/2016 6:06:00 PM

Constance, congrats on your 1st place win with your excellent etheree! I loved the imagery and that last line was my favorite. Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/27/2016 5:37:00 PM

Very pretty pictures painted with choice words, Constance! Congrats on your win :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2016 2:53:00 PM

A beautiful etheree Constance congrats on your top placement:-) hugs Jan xx

Karam Misra

Date: 7/27/2016 1:37:00 AM

Ah, Sweet Serenity! Congrats on your fine win, Broken Wings. ~karam~

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/27/2016 12:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/27/2016 12:55:00 AM

Wow Constance....a well deserved first place win with this superb etheree! Congratulations! 7 ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2016 12:46:00 AM

oh I loved this the very first time I saw it. BIG congrats to you. SO cool to be able to get a trophy. My one I have is way way back somewhere in my oldies, but I finally got one thanks to a recent skat contest.

John Watt

Date: 7/27/2016 12:28:00 AM

Wings, another beautiful write - so peaceful! Once again your lovely imagination shines through. I love the opening, "A day as clear as wine"... I shall think of that often this summer. Congrats on 1st place!