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Blue Moon of the Lake

The ripples formed , some cool , some warm , the Moon's reflection , glaring on the lake ... The starry night , light and bright , the Blue Moon of the lake , ripples making it shake ... ______________________________________________________ MY FIRST POEM OF 2014 !! GOT THIS TOPIC FROM SMURFS .........

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Date: 1/13/2016 10:50:00 AM
Very captivating love how you pull one into the picture.
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Date: 2/23/2015 2:24:00 AM
Hello Saanvi, I think this is a cool write, the last two lines are quite fun with the 'shaking' moon..' nice to hear about the Smurf connection, 'shows a receptive mind..'
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Date: 1/16/2014 9:20:00 PM
how sweet, and getting it from the smurfs. that is sure cute. I like a short little poem like this!
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:11:00 AM
Enjoyed the write and congratulations on the win, Saanvi
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Date: 1/10/2014 11:25:00 PM
Congratulations Saanvi, ... If you'd like take a trip to my blog ----> ON THE ROCKS------ http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18527&PoetID=18720 <---- enjoy if you'd like... Love Always & Forever <3 LINDA <3
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Date: 1/6/2014 3:15:00 PM
Good expressive imagery in this Saanvi, i thank you for your interest in my writes, and comments, Joe.
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