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Blue Moon Last Night

Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds Smoky, blue, ghost whisps moved just right Let it shine bright, close out of shrouds Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds For this gift to see I am proud Gift was gentle, eager soul took flight Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds Smoky, blue, ghost whisps moved just right (First attempt at the style of Triolet.)(My poem "Opportunity" explains about the term "Blue Moon".)

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/7/2010 5:00:00 AM

Beautiful! I am speechless. Lovingly, Dane Ann

James Fraser

Date: 1/5/2010 1:16:00 PM

A nice capture Sara, i need to expand my form portfolio, maybe 2010 will be the time? >> James

Richard Craig

Date: 1/4/2010 5:07:00 PM

great work!!! love love love it...

L'Nass Shango

Date: 1/4/2010 3:55:00 PM

I think you made a great accomplishment ... great inspiration.

David Byrne

Date: 1/1/2010 11:32:00 PM

Excellent write. I have heard so much about the blue moon since last night its amazing what interest there is in it!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/1/2010 4:30:00 PM

I think we saw a little of it when we left aviano's.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/1/2010 3:16:00 PM

nicely done, hope you had a great beginning today. I did. soup mail.

Sue Mason

Date: 1/1/2010 2:26:00 PM

Well, I missed it through the rain clouds ... smile ... I've wondered in the 2nd moon in a month is really "blue" and, if it is, why is it blue? Haven't studied the Triolet form yet ... maybe someday ... smile ... thanks for all your wonderful comments and hope 2010 is good for you and yours !

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/1/2010 2:08:00 PM

Nice write there! I love the concept of Blue Moons..I've often thought of writing a novel titled Blue Moon Rising...2nd to last line...did ya miss a "t"? 4th word? Light & Love & Happy New Year!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/1/2010 12:47:00 PM

I never tried this triolet style..You really did it honour..AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/1/2010 10:47:00 AM

Hi Sara, nice and powerful Triolet! Thank you for commenting New Year. Wishing you all the best and keep on with your good writing. Gert

Andrew Crisci

Date: 1/1/2010 10:27:00 AM

Happy New Year, Sara! Thanks for your comment. Your Triolet is very lovely and romantic, accompained by an imagery so realistic. May your inspiration and talent increase as we husher in the New Year! Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/1/2010 9:20:00 AM

This is excellent.Hope you have a Happy New Year.I posted a song called Sissy's Song by Alan Jackson.Please read in my honor.

P Sheart

Date: 1/1/2010 7:46:00 AM

Sara, a wonderful Triolet!! Anything to do with nature I'm hooked and captivated. Thanks for sharing sweet. Love Light Patty

Elaine George

Date: 1/1/2010 5:19:00 AM

Lovely Triolet, dear Sara. Yes. In Emily's poem she was writing about the unbearable grief of losing her father and her beau, life felt like a living hell for her as her grief was all consuming and she lived in constant fear of losing someone else she loved, I read her poem and read the material of her life that the poem was based on. All of her works and bio are on the internet. Love, Lainie