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Blue Moon

I'm lost inside your world... Hang on every word... A love I can't afford... I breaks my heart... Sapping my hopes.. Draining my dreams... I live my life in a constant daze... Confused,bewitched and bewildered... Hot under the collar... My love is far too young... It's painfully naive.. For a man matured in years.. I worry... About the money... Living faraway from friends... about the years I have not got... And yes I love too much.. Your always on my mind... Not to sure if that's healthy... You make me feel ten feet tall... And then I fall.. Or hit the wall... I am a fool... For believing dreams come true.. They only make you blue...

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Date: 8/29/2011 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Stephen. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2011 2:38:00 PM
sad, but i like it. tomorrows another day, good poetry.
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:51:00 PM
Hope you are having a wonderful week Stephen. I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today. Love, Carol
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Stephen Blencowe
Date: 7/26/2011 3:06:00 PM
thank you carol I read one of yours and sometimes wish I could be to the point but that is the beauty of poetry
Date: 7/26/2011 1:29:00 PM
wow, too sad...Nice write...God bless...Old Jack
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Stephen Blencowe
Date: 7/26/2011 1:34:00 PM
thank-you old jack..

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