Blue In Life

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Cobalt is beautiful Cobalt is deep blue Blue is gorgeous Blue is prominent Prominent in the sky Prominent in the ocean Ocean water is deep Ocean water filled Filled with fish Filled with coral Coral is colorful Coral is alive Alive in ocean Alive in reefs Reefs are shelters Reefs protect Protect fish Protect land Land offers life Land grows trees Trees clean air Trees give oxygen Oxygen for life Oxygen for humans Humans are misusing Humans take Take resources Take reserves Reserves are low Reserves lost Lost for eternity Lost forever Forever destroyed Forever needed Needed for the future Needed to live Live on this planet Live on this earth Earth is grand Earth God's plan Plan for mankind Plan for beauty Beauty man understands Beauty made perfect Perfect match Perfect for life Life relished Life love Love Relished

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Howard Kerr

Date: 2/5/2024 2:10:00 AM

Hi Sara, The dynamic of this Blitz is patently obvious from the very first line. It has flow and flourish in abundance. Immaculate image choice and delivery Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2024 3:08:00 AM

I feel honored to have such a nice review of my work, Howard. I liked that picture as well. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/4/2024 3:55:00 PM

wow, Sara K, you've come into your own with this poetic form! Your poem was captivating and succinct. I enjoyed the pace as well...have a great evening, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2024 3:07:00 AM

Why, thank you, Sara B. Well, I could always do it better or someone else do a better job, but that is life. Sara K