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Blue from Rio

Today I had the chance to hold "the blue from rio", A blue bird on a skateboard you should meet and know, A fancy parrot from the happy meal kid's land, Preening all his gorgeous feathers on his wheeled stand, Visit the happy meal site! Join his feathered flow.

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  1. Date: 4/14/2011 3:59:00 PM
    the second line looks like it is one syllable off though...I did this quite fast outside...that is all I can see...but next time let me know what the issue is first..

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 3:57:00 PM
    in canada rio, know and flow rhyme, and up here land and stand rhyme, I am unsure of them british sounding accents if you hear them differently then we do

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 3:56:00 PM
    hmm I understood limerick from what I read online as 1,2.5 as rhyming then lines 3 and 4 rhyme and I did syllables? it is about the bird from the new movies, could you let me know where i went wrong?