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Blue Face Betty

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It’s been so n i c e - to hear you now It’s been awhile Feeling like a l o s e r n o w Over my heart I f a l l Like a sucker punch It hurts so s w e l l T e l l m e T a l k to m e Tell me how you really feel - about m e T a l k to m e Come on - talk to me Blue face Betty It’s been months It’s been dizzying Life without you Seems like the worlds empty With empty w o r d s Without any empathy It’s cold in my heart T e l l m e T a l k to m e Tell me how you really feel - about m e T a l k to m e Come on - talk to me Blue face Betty Hit on me Turn your lips on me Take me out with a tease Come on Betty Come on Betty Come on Betty Come on Betty Come on Betty T a l k to m e

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Date: 12/27/2023 5:27:00 AM
You’ve expressed so sincerely the emptiness one feels in their beloveds absence. The longing and emotions in this hits strong. Pleasure always reading your work
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Paul Murray
Date: 12/27/2023 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for reading my raw scratchy write.

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