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Blue Eyes

blue eyes Your blue eyes your scream's and cry's your silly smile that makes my cry all the time for your the strange lady that makes my nervous my hands shake when touching your face of beauty the night walker

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Date: 11/1/2010 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Duncan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2010 8:07:00 PM
Congrats Duncan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:08:00 PM
excellent!! JB
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Date: 10/31/2010 4:48:00 PM
You're in love, Duncan!!! Beautiful! Keep writing and sharing... Always, Audrey
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:16:00 AM
Lovely lines Duncan.. u should enter into the Sentimental Love Letters contest if u expand a little more with your verse ... good luck if u do.. and thankxxx for sharing this Halloween Sunday..
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Date: 10/31/2010 6:30:00 AM
Very passionate write well penned on blue eyes, duncan
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Date: 10/31/2010 6:28:00 AM
Interesting composition..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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Date: 10/31/2010 4:02:00 AM
A sweet and honest write. Well done.
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