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Blue Eyes

The rain falling, making windows cry i draw a heart in the fog, with one finger, warm against the glass i color it in, and peek through the hole, i have made to the outside world i close my eyes, soft lashes brushing my skin --and the rain, is sliding down my cheek -it dies on my lips a burst of colorful memory explodes leaving my mind a thousand shattered pieces glimmering ice with jagged edge shinning swords pierce my heart again damp lips remincising -- the taste of salt from another source of warm life my eyes open -- deep pools of pain filled to the edge, with dieing rain once filled with light, this picture is bleak deaths lullaby to sorrowful sleep -- less nights heartless, lovefull plights once happy -- sad missing memories a nightmare could be born from the many twisted -- throwing faith into a panic dont panic -- though i suffer weakness from it --raiin falling from the sky it just so happens, that this sky is my sad blue eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/7/2013 1:37:00 PM
Emotions with a real, palpable pulse Jay - there is so much genuineness, not only in the message, alot of originality in these warm and sad lines - I love it - ' The taste of salt from another source of warm life...' - thats talented expression - I can feel it, see it, understand it - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/23/2009 2:13:00 PM
My heart is doing back-flips while my eyes are watering... Cesar is right. Your Love, .::James::.
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:37:00 PM
That was sad...and yet somehow produced some sort of relief; I love rain, it makes me happy, produces a sensation of numb perception of standard reality @.@ jojojojo thanks a lot for the experience, I hope there's no more rain around the corner of your eyes =) wiii bye bye PS: I sent you the translated poem by soup mail =D
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