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Blue Day

Black banked ominous clouds above Heavy heart circulates blood Tiny raindrops fall and splatter Tear drops threaten to flood Holiday season happy times Family plans grand fun Should be a season of hope, cheer Though times life feels undone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/22/2015 2:19:00 PM
- "Though times life feels undone" .....this line says a lot, dear Sara - Hope you feel better today - hugs & love // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:26:00 PM
Hi, Sara. Here's a big hug...(((Sara))) to chase those black clouds away!
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:46:00 PM
aww, such a sad write, my friend - I hope you aren't really feeling down
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