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Blue Daisy

I love those blue daisies yes, the white ones are nice But blue is my favorite it matches your eyes I love those blue daisies growing up on the hill Such lovely eye candy they give me a thrill I love those blue daisies when the soft breezes blow they dance and they sway putting on quite a show I cut a blue daisy to put in my hair then cut a few others for the vase by my chair. (For Blue Daisy contest - Sponsored by: Mystic Rose) Selected 10th place

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Date: 6/22/2017 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lenna ~*
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/25/2017 10:53:00 PM
Hi Eve, Thank You :)
Date: 6/21/2017 7:28:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poems, Lenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/21/2017 7:53:00 PM
Thank you kindly Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/21/2017 6:02:00 PM
Well done with this one, Lenna. Congratulations.
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/21/2017 7:52:00 PM
Thank You Lin, same to you :)
Date: 6/21/2017 5:38:00 PM
Beautiful, Lenna! :)
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/21/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim :)
Date: 6/20/2017 10:06:00 AM
Your beautiful poem blooms right before our eyes...speaking of eyes, "But blue is my favorite, it matches your eyes" I loved this line.
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/20/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thanks Chris, that's great to hear :) I though of 'sky' for a split second, as blue and sky are thought of together, but I liked 'eyes' better too :)
Date: 6/20/2017 3:32:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm to this wonderful poem. Good luck in the contest Lenna.
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/20/2017 5:54:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth, Thank you for the compliment and wishing me luck :)
Date: 6/20/2017 2:12:00 AM
Wonderful entry for the contest Lenna. It swings and sings and draws a beautiful picture for me :)
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/20/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thanks Darren :) You make me smile with your kind words :)
Date: 6/19/2017 7:13:00 PM
Bonjour, Lenna! Oh, this is really well done! What's not to love about this poem! Beautiful! Best of luck to you
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/19/2017 8:44:00 PM
Hi Rick, Thank you for your kind words. Glad you like it, I had fun writing it :)

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