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Blue Butterfly

blue butterfly dark night sky. Crystal wings dance of joy Wings spread wide make me beautiful flying town under bridge. shimmery stars gazing moon, blue butterfly dark night sky. a dream makes no sound. can't be seen. just flies. flies to the moon blue butterfly dark night sky. spectrum glimmering dance on the wind my heart flutters, touching sky flying high

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Date: 4/26/2016 7:06:00 AM
Hi Anita. Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Anita Sharma
Date: 9/19/2016 6:53:00 PM
thank you so much teddy
Date: 4/24/2016 6:39:00 PM
Congratulation for having this poem on the home page of Poetry soup webpage this week.
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Anita Sharma
Date: 9/19/2016 6:53:00 PM
thank you so much
Date: 10/10/2015 10:57:00 PM
Hi Anita, You have a wonderful way with free verse and rhyme. Your words flow with amazing beauty, adding the best imagery to your wings.... LOVE LINDA
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Anita Sharma
Date: 10/12/2015 11:02:00 AM
thnku linda ..love
Date: 10/9/2015 8:43:00 AM
The repeated refrain sets the tone of your poem. Beautiful dream like quality in your words and flow.
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Anita Sharma
Date: 10/9/2015 5:40:00 PM
thank you mr inman
Date: 9/23/2015 2:35:00 PM
Just Beautiful ! Welcome to ps Sharma- Charma
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Anita Sharma
Date: 9/23/2015 9:47:00 PM
thanku mam for your kind words

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