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Blue Brine Horizon

Swelling tide billows in with ultimate force, insulting bronze sandy shoreline on its course. Tossing creatures about in brine water home, mixing, churning into a white frothy foam. Against blue horizon velvet waters peer to merge, illusion vanishes with every sea wavelet surge. Eyes search far beyond azure ocean so vast, replicates placidity recently glassed…. Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/10/2011 7:42:00 AM
Wow... u really mastered the words! I like how you described the waves :)
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:21:00 AM
i wanna glide with you, caryl... refreshin offering! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:29:00 PM
some nice images, Caryl. I especially liked that third stanza where the blue horizon is mentioned.
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:41:00 PM
just luv the ocean Caryl and u made it so pretty with the many phases of it's fabulous waves and colors.. good luck in the contest.. taking a dip with your words so perfect..
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:51:00 PM
Enjoyed your blue horizon!!
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:22:00 PM
this is wonderfully written good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:38:00 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest, Caryl
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