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Blue Blueberries

Blue--a "vision" of beauty is the blueberry loaded with blue Blue--"gentle" the dew as it kisses each tender morsal of skin Blue--soft and "quiet" the foosteps that approach the bush loaded with blue Blue--cobalt blue blueberries "excite" the taste buds as they touch the tongue Blue--blueberry crunch'n warm from the oven cinnamon 'aroma" fills the air Vision__sight gentle__touch quiet__hear excite__taste aroma__smell A "vision" of the blueberry bush loaded with its blue Awesome gift of "touch" granted to caress each berry During morn's "quiet", gently embraced by the dew One picked to "excite" the taste buds, two picked while I tarry Many picked for dessert, "aroma" floats, awaits cream from dairy Flavors Marry Written: Saturday October 24, 2015

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Date: 11/12/2015 6:56:00 AM
I like how you wrote the one, congrats.
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:49:00 PM
Excellent rhyme poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:09:00 AM
Sara, a warm feeling to your wonderful and tasty win, Congratulations -- SKAT
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sara! I could taste the blueberries in this write. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:14:00 AM
Such a gentle and lovely poem to enter in this very challenging contest, good luck Sara! :) , warm regards, Laura.
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/12/2015 2:41:00 PM
Congrats Sara! Well done :)
Date: 11/3/2015 6:05:00 PM
very nice, Sara. I sure had a hard time understanding how to do this challenge so maybe I will not try it. Sure hope you did it right, so you can get a win on this lovely poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/4/2015 6:07:00 AM
Andrea, I don't know if I did it right but I tried..LOL.. Sara
Date: 10/27/2015 7:57:00 AM
Sara, clever and wow! still am thinking what should I do for this contest.. =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 10/27/2015 6:31:00 AM
I love blueberries, they are a feast for the body, and I love your poetry, it is a feast for the mind.
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:16:00 PM
Sara, wonderful, creative free-form! have picked blueberries meself! You are spot-on in this delightful poem! jimmy
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Date: 10/25/2015 1:27:00 AM
That is always you SARA, your excellent write is intriguing. Brilliant one............A.M.
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Date: 10/24/2015 2:17:00 PM
Blueberry muffins are my favorite...Nicely penned Sara...
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