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Blue and Red

Such a lovely color this deep blue hue Otherworldy lies too dark to be true She counts sapphire stars under the moon Disorderly dreams fallen down too soon Moods shifting, red hot heat burning embers Eyelashes lifted in cold glances still simmers She bleeds an ice frosted shade that haunts Nightmares that coil inward, sends red taunts The fiery meteor has landed Molten lava inside her has expanded Consumed in fire she explodes in scorched rage Aged, drained, turning back to the blue page It starts to frost over again this time Azure lake of emotion hides this her crime Pray the red does not awake, this is true Such a lovely color this deep blue hue

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Date: 2/23/2014 7:56:00 PM
Tim I loved the color changes with the mood swings! great write 7, my best chuck
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Date: 2/17/2014 6:52:00 PM
Wow I truly enjoyed your imagery, beautifully done, love the blue hue part the best also the red lava really i enjoyed all of it. I'm glad you enjoyed my gentleman poem the inspirational man was a real gentle in real life. cheri
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Tim B
Date: 2/18/2014 10:07:00 AM
Cherl, No problem, thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poetry. I really enjoyed your poem about the gladiators and the Coloseum.
Date: 2/17/2014 3:27:00 PM
I'm partial to green myself, a deep soothing green is my pleasure, but blue and red are beautiful too, and blue can be very soothing as well! Red has an energy that blue seems to lack, but blue can be just as damaging truth be known! That's why I choose a lovely green, full of life within its own soul! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem here this afternoon! What a dynamic piece, Great Work!!
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Tim B
Date: 2/18/2014 10:09:00 AM
Russell, Ahhh, it is all symbolic my friend. Green is very peaceful indeed. They say genius' choose green :).
Date: 2/17/2014 3:09:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Very expressive and descriptive work..Thanks for the visi to my page..Sara
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Tim B
Date: 2/18/2014 10:09:00 AM
Hi Sara, Thanks for stopping by, i'm glad you enjoyed this one.

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