Blue

Blue is so pretty Blue is so deep Blue is the color I see when I sleep Blue can be light Blue can be dark I like the sky blue I see at the park (entered into the juvenilia competition) 8th Place (Rhyming poem school assignment - Age 11)

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Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 5/25/2017 5:20:00 AM

I love the subject - colour is fundamental to the world.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/25/2017 11:33:00 AM

Thank You kindly Cecelia :) I am thrilled to have been placed in the top 10 :)

Keith Osborne

Date: 5/1/2017 8:58:00 PM

Very well written at such a young age. The meter is wonderful and it's so light and fun. Thank you for sharing your early work.

Keith Osborne
Date: 5/2/2017 2:55:00 PM

I would have to disagree with that teacher. I suffer from VERY vivid dreams - at times in colour. I think, at eleven, you may have had an insight that few experience, at any age.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/2/2017 10:31:00 AM

Thank You Keith :) I had little knowledge when I wrote it other than the rhyme part required for my assignment. It was fun then and still is. (except my teacher said we do not dream in color) who knew? at 11? Thank you for your support.

Chris Green

Date: 5/1/2017 5:53:00 PM

That is so good for 11 years old. And still the meter is smooth and the rhymes nicely done. I enjoyed this Lenna.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/1/2017 6:14:00 PM

Thank You Chris :) My teacher chose mine to read to the class, although embarrassing at the time, it was also encouraging for me. (probably why I saved this one)